Hello! I am delivering the feedback his piece revieced during #Traditional-Artists's Critique Night
By *Donguri7: "Wow, ballpoint?! Iím impressed. Youíve rendered a great variety of tones with a ballpoint pen, and your dedication to clean hatching is amazing. The drawing is structurally very sound. Iím noticing a bit of waviness in the line defining the right most edge of the straight box, but really, itís great. Double check the perspective with regard to the bottom corner of the full box thatís lowest - it feels like it should be a bit to our left. Other than that, awesome job, and a really nice contrast between crumpled and full!"
By =eschlehahn: ": the ballpoint pen work here is awesome - I like how the shading and the outlines were done. the only thing I could point out here is the fact that the crumpled box in the foreground looks slightly off in perspective : The box clasp (or whatever this is called in english) looks as if little bit too far on the left and not in the middle. Might just be an effect because of the shading left of it. And the bottom line of the box looks a bit too short. Not sure if this is just me or really a perspective problem here though It's a very good drawing though "